技术写作实战(3)

请按照技术写作的要求修改下面的句子:

  1. Do not turn off the computer when the application is still running. Doing so will stop all the tasks in process.
  2. This section will describe the configuration parameters.
  3. When the function returned a value, the loop escapes.
  4. When the function returns a value, the loop will escape.
  5. Enter all the required information, and then click Next. The confirmation screen will display.
  6. The following defects were fixed in this release.
  7. If you selected Reset in the previous screen, the current screen displays the default settings.

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  1. Grace 的头像 Grace 说:
    The confirmation screen displays. 还需要改是吗?
    改成The confirmation screen is displayed. 或者使用主动语态The screen displays the confirmation message. 或者The confirmation screen appears.

    Dan 于 2013-12-2 21:46:34 回复
    哈哈,Grace,你说的很对。
    ada 于 2013-12-12 17:07:18 回复
    我用的display呢,刚才都才成appear拉^_^ 长知识
  2. Coral 的头像 Coral 说:
    TW style guides可以在哪里看?
    Dan 于 2014-3-28 9:45:08 回复
    一般具有一定规模的公司都有自己的 writing style guide, 这里面也有一些可以参考:
    http://www.technicalwriter.cn/style.html
  3. nexus 的头像 nexus 说:
    6.The following defects were fixed in this release.
    The fixed defects are as below: XXX. 我第一印象是这个,语感上好像用被动描述的多。
  4. TW 的头像 TW 说:
    感谢lz的教导~很受用

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