技术写作实战(5)

请按照技术写作的要求修改下面的句子:

  1. The default value of the <duration> parameter of this JS function is 100.
  2. Remove the selected record from the list by clicking Drop.
  3. You can create your maintenance plan with Schedule Editor.
  4. Enter the record number that you want to search for.
  5. Click on Next (or press on the Enter key).

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  1. Jade 的头像 Jade 说:
    很棒的测试~ 请问这些题目是你自己编的还是从什么地方借用过来的呢?
    Dan 于 2014-5-20 17:12:12 回复
    是自己编的,所以有什么疏漏不妥,还请多多包涵指正。
  2. TW 的头像 TW 说:
    感谢楼主!很棒的例子和分析!
    Dan 于 2017/06/06 15:11:35 回复
    不客气~
  3. Vicky 的头像 Vicky 说:
    Thanks.
    Dan 于 2017/06/06 15:12:00 回复
    Welcome~
  4. Joy 的头像 Joy 说:
    目前TechComm业内,推崇minimalism writing。所以我按我日常受训style,改一改你的句子。互相探讨一下. :)

    2. Click Drop to remove the selected record from the list.
    Revised: To remove the selected record from the list, click Drop.
    Reason: Put action purpose before action. <我们在用Acrolinx检查语法,其中的有一条rule就是这点。Acrolinx支持定制语法检查点,这点也可能是我司特有的)

    3. You can create your maintenance plan with Schedule Editor.
    我会这样改:
    Creating a maintenance plan using Schedule Editor.

    4. Enter the record number that you want to search for.
    According to minimalism writing, I will change it to:
    Enter a record number as needed or Enter a record number.
    Dan 于 2017/06/06 15:09:40 回复
    2. 同意。
    3. Create?by using?
    3. 同意,如果上下文已经能够表达出输入number的目的。
    另外,可以给“TC沪联”微信公众号留言,进行更直接的交流:Shanghai-TC
  5. Cyril 的头像 Cyril 说:
    我的话,会这样改:

    1. The default value of JS function's <duration> parameter is 100.
    2. Click Drop to remove the selected record from the list.
    3. Use schedule Editor to create your maintenance plan.
    4. Enter the record number and search.
    5. Click Next (or press the Enter key).
  6. Aki 的头像 Aki 说:
    HeheHeheHeheHehe1. The default value of the <duration> parameter of this JS function is 100.
    --> The parameter <duration> in the JS function has the default value of 100.

    2. Remove the selected record from the list by clicking Drop.
    --> To remove the selected record from the list, click Drop.

    3. You can create your maintenance plan with Schedule Editor.
    --> To create your maintenance plan, use Schedule Editor.

    4. Enter the record number that you want to search for.
    Click on Next (or press on the Enter key).
    --> To search, enter the record number, then click Next or press Enter.Hehe

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